Что не так с этим текстом? It was about 9:20 a.m. on Friday, January 22. I overslept and was late for school. I was in a big hurry to get to school, so I decided to take a shortcut. In one of the alleys I ran into a vandal. He was drawing graffiti on one of the residential buildings. As soon as the vandal noticed me, he ran straight away and disappeared around the corner somewhere. I continued on my way to school. The perpetrator was wearing a black jacket, gray pants and a blue hat. He did not look more than 15 years old. He was of medium height, about 1.70.
There is nothing wrong with this text.