Найти ошибки в предложениях There are many environmental problems in the world today, for example air pollution. factories and cars release a lot of exhaust fumes. It causes at least one million deaths a year, mostly from cancer and strokes. also a serious problem is the presence of ozone holes and on increase in the green house effect from year to year. also vare species of animals are dying out and forests are being out down. But we can solve this problems , if we try together.
"for example air pollution." - отсутствует артикль "the": for example, the air pollution."factories and cars release a lot of exhaust fumes. It causes at least one million deaths a year, mostly from cancer and strokes." - кажется, что причиной смерти тут выступает "exhaust fumes", что не совсем верно. Лучше переформулировать: factories and cars release a lot of exhaust fumes, which contribute to at least one million deaths a year, mostly from cancer and strokes."also a serious problem is the presence of ozone holes and on increase in the green house effect from year to year." - здесь не нужно использовать "also" в начале предложения. Лучше переформулировать: A serious problem is the presence of ozone holes and the increase in the greenhouse effect from year to year."also vare species of animals are dying out and forests are being out down." - слово "vare" должно быть "various". Лучше переформулировать: Also, various species of animals are dying out and forests are being cut down."But we can solve this problems , if we try together." - отсутствует артикль "these" и лишний пробел перед запятой. Лучше переформулировать: But we can solve these problems if we try together.
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"for example air pollution." - отсутствует артикль "the": for example, the air pollution."factories and cars release a lot of exhaust fumes. It causes at least one million deaths a year, mostly from cancer and strokes." - кажется, что причиной смерти тут выступает "exhaust fumes", что не совсем верно. Лучше переформулировать: factories and cars release a lot of exhaust fumes, which contribute to at least one million deaths a year, mostly from cancer and strokes."also a serious problem is the presence of ozone holes and on increase in the green house effect from year to year." - здесь не нужно использовать "also" в начале предложения. Лучше переформулировать: A serious problem is the presence of ozone holes and the increase in the greenhouse effect from year to year."also vare species of animals are dying out and forests are being out down." - слово "vare" должно быть "various". Лучше переформулировать: Also, various species of animals are dying out and forests are being cut down."But we can solve this problems , if we try together." - отсутствует артикль "these" и лишний пробел перед запятой. Лучше переформулировать: But we can solve these problems if we try together.