May 30, 2013 Dear Granny, School are over, I said Goodbye to all my cl assmate and teachers.I'll comes to see you soon.I'd like to play on the forest and go fishing with my old friends.When father and mother have there holidays we'll go to the mountains.It'll be great.Father thinks the air is good their.Mother like to pick up flowers and berry Love from Sandy 8 ошибок наити
"I'll comes to see you soon." should be "I'll come to see you soon.""I'd like to play on the forest" should be "I'd like to play in the forest.""When father and mother have there holidays" should be "When father and mother have their holidays.""It'll be great." should be "It will be great.""Father thinks the air is good their." should be "Father thinks the air is good there.""Mother like to pick up flowers and berry" should be "Mother likes to pick up flowers and berries."Missing punctuation after "berry" in the last sentence.Missing punctuation after "Love from Sandy" at the end of the letter.