Правильно составлен стих? (Исправьте грамматические ошибки)Hunting learn to singAnd be master of the dance,Beautiful to be able to draw,And to achieve anything in life.But the dream as a dream the past,The other for a moment you've become, And the smallest slightest,You told the wonder of the world.Her beautiful eyes,Seeing the world turned upside down, And soon I realized then,Love is a hard war.
Hunting, learning to sing And being master of the dance, Being able to draw beautifully, And achieving anything in life. But dreams, as dreams, pass In a moment you become another, And even the smallest of things, Will show you the wonders of the world. Her beautiful eyes, Seeing the world upside down, And soon I realized, Love is a tough battle.
Hunting, learning to sing
And being master of the dance,
Being able to draw beautifully,
And achieving anything in life.
But dreams, as dreams, pass
In a moment you become another,
And even the smallest of things,
Will show you the wonders of the world.
Her beautiful eyes,
Seeing the world upside down,
And soon I realized,
Love is a tough battle.