Correct the mistakes. The town 1) whi4 I was born has changed greatly over the last twenty years. Now, there is a modern shopping centre in the place 2) that my school used to be and all the children 3) whose went there have grown up and moved away. The local cinema, 4) that was built several years ago, used to be a dance hall 5) which big bands played. The park, 6) where was my favourite place as a child, is now a car park. Some things are sti ll the same though. Mrs Jones, 7) whom is now sixty years old, sti ll works in the Post Office and Mr Jones still owns the baker's shop, 8) that his two sons now work. The hospital 9) where I was born in is still standing, although it is now much bigger than it was at the time 10) which I was born. The day. 11) which my family and i left our home town was one of the saddest days of my life
The town where I was born has changed greatly over the last twenty years. Now, there is a modern shopping centre in the place that my school used to be and all the children who went there have grown up and moved away. The local cinema, which was built several years ago, used to be a dance hall where big bands played. The park, which was my favourite place as a child, is now a car park. Some things are still the same though. Mrs Jones, who is now sixty years old, still works in the Post Office and Mr Jones still owns the baker's shop, where his two sons now work. The hospital where I was born is still standing, although it is now much bigger than it was at the time I was born. The day when my family and I left our home town was one of the saddest days of my life.
The town where I was born has changed greatly over the last twenty years. Now, there is a modern shopping centre in the place that my school used to be and all the children who went there have grown up and moved away. The local cinema, which was built several years ago, used to be a dance hall where big bands played. The park, which was my favourite place as a child, is now a car park. Some things are still the same though. Mrs Jones, who is now sixty years old, still works in the Post Office and Mr Jones still owns the baker's shop, where his two sons now work. The hospital where I was born is still standing, although it is now much bigger than it was at the time I was born. The day when my family and I left our home town was one of the saddest days of my life.