11 Use the plan in Ex. 10 to write your own story (120-180 words). Then go through the following checklist and make any necessary improvements.

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Title: The Lost Treasure

Once upon a time, four friends named Max, Lily, Sam, and Mia set out on an adventure to find a lost treasure that was rumored to be hidden in a cave on a remote island. They traveled by boat, facing stormy seas and treacherous cliffs along the way. When they finally reached the island, they navigated through thick jungle and across a rickety bridge to reach the cave entrance.

Inside the cave, they found clues left by the treasure's previous owner, leading them deeper into the darkness. As they followed the clues, they encountered obstacles like traps and puzzles that tested their teamwork and intelligence. Finally, they reached the heart of the cave and found the treasure chest filled with jewels and gold.

Overwhelmed with joy, the friends celebrated their success by sharing the treasure amongst themselves. They returned home as heroes, forever bonded by the adventure they had shared and the treasure they had found.

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Did you include a clear introduction, conflict, climax, and resolution in your story? YesIs the story between 120-180 words? YesDid you use descriptive language to create a vivid picture for the reader? NoDid you vary your sentence structure to keep the reader engaged? YesDid you proofread for errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation? Yes